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Friday, March 22, 2019

The Medusa Ritual - Installment 8

The Medusa Ritual
A Pierce Mostyn Paranormal Investigation
by
CW Hawes



Dotty’s a prisoner, and Mostyn must walk away if he is to ever see her again. But that isn’t the worst of it.
Read on for more adventure!



8


Mostyn opened his eyes. He didn’t move anything except for his eyes. He took in everything he could see without moving his head. The lighting was subdued. The ceiling, and what he could see of the walls, reminded him of his hotel room. Why was he here? Where had he been?
Images of a street and buildings and a long black limo flooded into his mind.
“Dotty.” The word came out as a barely audible croak, although he’d meant to shout it.
“Are you awake, Boss?” The voice belonged to Jones.
Mostyn tried to get up.
“Whoa, Boss.” Jones put his hand on Mostyn’s chest and gently pushed him back down. “Hang on a minute.”
Jones got out his phone, made a call, and after a moment said, “He’s awake.” Call ended, Jones returned the phone to his pocket.
“Where’s Dotty?”
“We were kinda hoping you’d tell us.”
Mostyn got up on his elbows. “What do you mean?”
The door opened and in walked a man, who was followed by Dr Bardon.
“Ah, Pierce, my boy, good to see you awake.”
“Thank you, sir,” Mostyn replied.
Bardon introduced the man with him. “This is Dr Addison Clarke. He’s been monitoring you since you were unceremoniously dumped on the hotel steps. Thanks to Mr Jones, we were able to get to you before the paramedics arrived. Wouldn’t do to have you in a civilian hospital.”
“Dumped?” Confusion was written all over Mostyn’s face. He shook his head. “Where’s Dotty?”
“We were hoping you could tell us,” Bardon said. “Her subdermal tracker is being effectively blocked.”
“I don’t know where she is.” Mostyn then explained about the attempt to run him over, the javelin attack, and finally the abduction. “I don’t recall anything after the powder, until now.”
“Very interesting,” Bardon replied. “It appears this Asian fellow knows a thing or two about spells. It also seems he has our Dr Kemper.”
“We have to find Dotty,” Mostyn said.
“We will,” Bardon replied. “But first let Dr Clarke have a look at you.”
Bardon stepped back and the doctor moved next to the bed to begin his examination. After listening with his stethoscope, shining a light in Mostyn’s eyes and throat, and testing his reflexes, Clarke seemed satisfied Mostyn was okay.
“Good,” Bardon said. “Thank you, Dr Clarke. I’ll take it from here.”
Clarke wished everyone a good day, and left.
“The team is in Conference Room C,” Bardon said. “Get dressed, and we’ll join them. Come with me, Mr Jones.”
Bardon and Jones retired to the outer sitting room, closing the door behind them.
Mostyn got out of bed, took a quick shower, after which he began dressing. He was knotting his tie when his phone rang. He picked it up.
“Good afternoon, Mr Mostyn.” The ancient and ethereal sounding British voice.
“Where’s—”
“She’s well. And she will continue to be well if you live by tonight. Once you have left Los Angeles, she will be released.”
“How do you—”
“You want proof. I expected as much. Jot down the link and password I am about to give you. Both will be good for the next fifteen minutes. Are you ready?”
“Go ahead.”
The voice gave Mostyn the information, which Mostyn jotted down.
“Safe travels, Mr Mostyn.” The voice was gone and there was only silence in its place.
Mostyn brought up the website on his phone and typed in the password. The site opened revealing a blank video screen. He tapped the “Join Conversation” button and Dotty appeared on the screen.
“Dotty! Can you hear me?”
“I can hear you, Pierce. Enable your video so I can see you. Can you see me?”
“I can.” He enabled the video and Dotty appeared before him on the screen.
“How do you like the outfit? Should I get one for home?” Dotty was dressed in a one piece, long yellow silk dress with a white flower print, that had a high collar and sleeves extending a couple inches passed her elbow. There was a long side split on both sides which showed Dotty’s legs up to a little bit above the middle of her thighs.
“Looks nice. Sure, get one for home. Are you alright?”
“I’m fine. But I won’t be if you don’t leave.”
“What do you mean?”
“I was told the eldest grandson has, and I quote, ‘taken a fancy to me’. If you don’t leave, I will become his mistress. Or maybe even his wife.”
Mostyn clenched his fists.
Dotty continued. “I was also told the grandson isn’t normal. I don’t know what they mean by that, but I have a feeling it’s not something I want to find out.”
“Don’t worry, Dot. My uncle will fix things.”
“Pierce. I’m scared, and you know I don’t say that very often.”
“Don’t worry, Dot. Hang in there.”
“I love you, Pierce.”
Before Mostyn could answer her, the masked man appeared. In that ancient and ethereal tone of voice he said, “Y’ah hafh’drm gof’nn mgahnnn shuggnglui llll ‘drn ah nog.” Then the screen went blank.
Mostyn finished tying his tie, and joined Bardon and Jones. “I just talked to Dotty.”
“How?” Jones asked.
“The wonders of modern technology, Jones. The masked man phoned me and gave me a link to a website so I could talk with her. It seems if I don’t leave, Dotty becomes the wife or plaything for the weird grandson of the masked man. She’s scared, Dr Bardon. And you know Dotty doesn’t scare easily.”
“Did the masked man say anything?” Bardon asked.
“He did. I think it was R’lyehian.”
“Oh, dear, my boy. Can you repeat it?”
“I think so.” And Mostyn repeated the message to the best of his ability.
Bardon listened, pondered it for a minute or two, then said, “If you’ve repeated it correctly, the masked man said, ‘I am the Summoner of the Spawn preparing the gate, or way, for the One Who is coming.”



To Be Continued!




While waiting for the next installment, the entire Pierce Mostyn Paranormal series is available for your reading pleasure.

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“…a weird tale of adventure, humor, and horror.”




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Friday, February 15, 2019

The Medusa Ritual - Installment 3

Insignia of the Office of Unidentified Phenomena


The Medusa Ritual
A Pierce Mostyn Paranormal Investigation
by
CW Hawes


“This mission seems too simple,” Mostyn says, and his gut feeling is right.

In this third installment, things move to Los Angeles and the world of art on the west coast. Dotty feels insecure and asks Pierce… Well read on! The adventure continues!



3


Mostyn looked out the window of the jet. Next to him, across the narrow isle was Dotty Kemper. In the seats facing him and Dotty were Willie Lee Baker, the mission’s photographer, and Dr Otto Stoppen, an assistant librarian at the OUP’s secret library. Baker and Stoppen were discussing F-stops.
The other team members were in the seats and on the sofa in the back of the jet. Jones and NicAskill were talking about weapons, while Winifred Petrie, a zoologist, and Harbin Hammerschmidt, a chemist, discussed gardening.
Dotty touched Mostyn’s arm. “Are you brooding?”
“No.”
“I don’t think you’ve said two words since we got into the air.”
“I’ve said at least two dozen.”
“Are you worried about Helene?”
“A little.”
“The doctor said she’ll be fine.”
“I know.”
“So what else is on your mind?”
“The book. This mission seems too simple.”
Dotty let out a throaty laugh. “If you believe anything Bardon gives us is simple, I have a movie studio in Hollywood I can sell you.”
Mostyn smiled. “I just might take you up on that offer. Do I get to star in my own movie?”
“Sure, Pierce.” She took his hand and brought it to her lips and kissed it.
“Good thing we’ll be landing in twenty minutes,” Baker said.
“Shut up, Willie Lee,” Dotty shot back.
“Just letting you know so you can get the timing right.”
“Go back to your camera talk.”
Baker laughed, said, “Sure Dot”, and turned back to Dr Stoppen and their conversation.
Dotty turned to Mostyn. “There’ll be plenty of excitement before we even see this damn book Bardon wants. Mark my words.”
“I’m sure you’re right, Dot.”
The pilot’s voice sounded over the intercom, announcing they were making their final approach to the Los Angeles airport. After a moment his voice came back on. “And thank you for flying with OUP airlines, where your secrets are common knowledge to us and we don’t let you know a damn thing. And, as always, good luck.”
“See, Mostyn,” Dotty said, “even the pilot knows the score.”

***

A black unmarked van picked up the team and their luggage at the plane, and whisked them off to their hotel. Herndon, the accounting wonk, as Mostyn referred to him, had booked everyone into double rooms.
In the lobby, as Mostyn was handing out room assignments, Baker noted, “Herndon’s on a money saving kick again.” To which Jones replied, “He’s always on a money saving kick.”
Mostyn chuckled. “At least this time he remembered Dotty and I are together.”
“He had to,” Dotty replied. “It’s simple math. Four rooms or five rooms. Four if you and I are together, five if we’re not.”
“Just don’t do anything I wouldn’t do,” Baker said.
Jones slapped Baker on the back. “If they do that we’re going to be short two people for this mission.”
“What do you mean?” Baker protested. “I’m very faithful…” He and Jones went off to find their room.
Petrie shook her head, said, “Men”, and headed for the elevator. NicAskill, her roommate, shrugged, and followed.
Mostyn, Kemper, Hammerschmidt, and Stoppen picked up their luggage and made their way to the elevator.
“Do you know how we are going to locate the book?” Stoppen asked.
“Not really,” Mostyn replied. “There is an art exhibit tomorrow. Bardon wants us there. His sources are telling him that’s the place to begin. And if Dr Bardon says that’s where we start, then that’s where we start.”
“I don’t normally do field work,” Stoppen said. “I was just wondering.”
“Quite alright, Doctor,” Mostyn replied. “Sometimes we don’t even have that much to go on.”
There was a ding and the elevator door opened. They got in and rode to their floor in silence. When they got out of the elevator, Mostyn wished the men good night, and they continued on down the hall to their room. Mostyn swiped the pass card, and he and Dotty entered their room.
When the door closed, Dotty threw her arms around Mostyn and kissed him. “Do you love me, Pierce?”
“You know I do, Dot.”
“More than Helene?”
Mostyn held her tight, kissed her, and said, “That’s unfair, Dotty. Helene is different.”
Dottie pulled away and sat in a chair. “Bardon and his goddamn magic. Sometimes I really hate the guy.”
Mostyn kneeled next to her, and took her hands in his. “I love you, Dotty Kemper. You were first in my heart then, and you’re first in my heart now.”
“But is that you or Bardon talking?”
“I think my lips were moving. Weren’t they?”
“They were.”
“Maybe we should get some other things moving as well.”
She withdrew her hands from his, and placed them on his cheeks. “Never let me go, Pierce. I don’t care what Bardon does. Never let me go.”
“I won’t, Dot. I promise.”
She kissed him. “I’m holding you to that.” She stood. “Okay, Mostyn, let’s get some other things moving.”
Mostyn stood. “You’re on, Kemper.”


To Be Continued!




While waiting for the next installment, the entire Pierce Mostyn Paranormal series is available for your reading pleasure.

Do you hate cliffhangers? There’s none in this series. Each book stands by itself.

Do you think books are magic? That for just a while you can be anywhere, doing anything? Then join Pierce Mostyn and experience some magic!

“I have read much of the CW Hawes oeuvre, but confess a special joy in this series, featuring Pierce Mostyn from the Office of Unidentified Phenomenon. The stories are fun and exciting, and manage to mash mythos, monsters and tech into an enjoyable whole.” —Richard Schwindt, author of Herkimer’s Nose and Tony Price: Confidential.




Are engaging characters your thing? Join my VIP Readers and you’ll get the Pierce Mostyn short story, “The Feeder” — available only to my VIP Readers! And you’ll be the first to know when the revised book version of The Medusa Ritual comes out!


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Friday, February 1, 2019

The Medusa Ritual - Installment 1

The Medusa Ritual



Dr Rafe Bardon, Director of the uber-secret US Office of Unidentified Phenomena (OUP), sends his best agent, Pierce Mostyn, to retrieve a book of arcane and deadly knowledge before its owner can use the tome to unleash a reign of terror upon America and the world.

The thrilling adventure begins now!


The Medusa Ritual

A Pierce Mostyn Paranormal Investigation

by

CW Hawes


1


An eerie, high-pitched piping came from the clearing in the woods. Filtering through the trees was an orange-colored iridescence.
“We found it, Mostyn Pierce,” Helene Dubreuil’s words appeared in Special Agent Pierce Mostyn’s mind.
He gave her a hand signal indicating he’d received her thought, and whispered into his headset, “Dotty, do you hear the piping and see the glow?”
“I’m not deaf and blind, Mostyn.”
“Good. I want you and NicAskill to move down the hill and flank the thing from the east.”
“Got it,” Dr Dotty Kemper replied.
“Do you copy, Jones?” Mostyn asked.
“Yep. You want Doc Petrie and I to move in from the west, I take it.”
“I do.”
“On it, Boss.”
“Baker here, Mostyn. Dr Stoppen and I will hold the entrance to the ravine so it doesn’t escape.”
“Good, Willie Lee,” Mostyn replied. “Helene and I will attempt to make the capture. We’re moving out now.”
Mostyn shouldered the bag of transmitters for the Electronic Confinement Array. Helene carried the activation device. She held Mostyn’s hand and dematerialized them both.
Mostyn and Helene crept through the woods, because Helene wasn’t sure if the thing could or couldn’t see them in the dematerialized state and Mostyn wanted to play it safe. At the same time, Dotty Kemper and Special Agent Kymbra NicAskill moved into position on the east side of the clearing, while DC Jones and Dr Winifred Petrie moved into position on the west.
The closer Mostyn and Helene crept towards the clearing, the louder the piping and the brighter the orange glow became. In addition, Mostyn began to smell a putridly rancid odor wafting on the light breeze. It took all of his will power to keep his stomach from heaving out his hastily eaten lunch.
In his ear, Mostyn heard Kemper’s voice, “My God, what is that stench?” Focused on the task at hand, Mostyn ignored her.
Helene’s voice sounds in his mind. “We are almost on the edge of the clearing.”
Mostyn sent his thoughts back to her. “We’ll plant the first transmitter directly ahead, and then move around the creature clockwise.”
“Yes, Mostyn Pierce.”
They broke into the clearing. Before them was a giant, orange spheroid object. It’s surface pockmarked with what looked like craters. Mostyn thought the thing looked like an orange moon.
Helene gasped. “It’s my Lord—”
“Focus, Helene!” Mostyn thought.
But it was too late. Helene’s concentration broke and they flickered back to visibility. In that instant, an arm of orange goo shot our towards them. Mostyn pushed Helene to his left and dived to his right. The arm of goo passed between them engulfed a tree and withdrew, ripping the tree out of the ground. When the tree made contact with the surface of the sphere, it vanished.
Another orange tentacle shot out towards Mostyn, who rolled out of the way. The tentacle withdrew, sticking to it were grass and rocks.
Mostyn was headed for the tree line when a scream blasted through his headset. He turned and saw Helene, who’d been snared by one of the things protoplasmic tentacles, being pulled towards the monster.
NicAskill’s voice blasted through Mostyn’s headset. “Incoming!” she yelled. And a moment later a bolt of lightning flashed out of the trees, accompanied by a tremendous thunderclap. Mostyn was knocked off his feet by the concussion of the rapid change in air pressure. From the corner of his eye, he saw the lightning bolt strike the monstrosity.
The creature’s piping shot up the register until it was almost out of the range of human hearing. Waves of red and black and gray spread across the sphere from where the lightning bolt struck the thing. The monstrosity rose into the air, and again NicAskill’s voice was heard to yell, “Incoming!”
The second lightning bolt blasted its way through the trees and struck the now slowly rotating spheroid. The creature dropped back down to the earth. The weird orange light began flickering and a dark gray began spreading out from the wounds inflicted by NicAskill’s weapon.
Mostyn got up on his hands and knees. His eyes swept the clearing, looking for Helene. He spotted her some seventy feet away from him, lying face down.
He started crawling towards her, and was only barely aware of Jones’s voice coming over the headset saying, “I got this!” A split second later, a rocket screamed out of the woods, struck the monstrosity and a dull whump sounded as the thermite warhead ignited.
The high-pitched piping sound of the thing soared beyond human hearing. From inside the giant monstrosity, Mostyn saw an ever expanding red glow, and then flames burst out of the thing like volcanic eruptions.
A scream rent the air. A scream that came from the creature and one that was human, all too human. The monstrous obscenity collapsed into a black, burning ooze.
Mostyn jumped to his feet and ran the remaining distance to Helene. He felt for a pulse and found one. She was still alive. He pressed a key on the radio control box. “Sumer Base, come in Sumer Base, over.”
“Sumer Base here, Mostyn.”
“Target destroyed. We have one casualty. Need emergency evac.”
“Roger, Mostyn. Dispatching now. ETA, four minutes.”
The other team members arrived. Dotty Kemper knelt next to Mostyn, and held his hand. “She’ll be alright, Pierce. She’s tougher than all of us.”
“I hope so, Dot. I hope so.”
“I know so,” Dotty replied. “Now we need to get as much of that goo collected as we can for the lab. Bardon will be pissed as it is. The least we can do is save the remains.”
“Right, Dot.” Mostyn stood. “Alright everybody, let’s collect as much of that goo as we can. The lab will want it.” He looked at Dotty.
“I’ll stay with her, Pierce.”
Mostyn nodded and followed the rest of his team to what remained of Tommy John MacIlhenney.

To Be Continued!




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Tuesday, January 29, 2019

The Medusa Ritual

The insignia of the Office of Unidentified Phenomena


This Friday, 1 February 2019, I’ll start serializing the working draft of my new Pierce Mostyn novel—The Medusa Ritual.

So I thought I’d talk a little bit today on what inspired me to write the book, and why I am choosing to serialize the working draft on my blog.

The Inspiration

The other day, on Twitter, I received one of those tweets where you answer a question and then tag a few other people. The question was name 5+ writers who inspired you to write.

My list was:

Edgar Allan Poe
Sir Arthur Conan Doyle
Saki
HP Lovecraft
Robert E Howard
Rex Stout
Lawrence Block
Anthony Trollope

I would’ve added Jules Verne, but ran out of characters.

It’s no secret that the Pierce Mostyn series draws on HP Lovecraft for its primary inspiration. Nightmare in Agate Bay is more or less a contemporary retelling of “The Shadow over Innsmouth”. Stairway to Hell drew inspiration from Lovecraft and Bishop’s “The Mound”. While Terror in the Shadows was inspired by HPL’s “The Lurking Fear”.

“The Man of Stone” by HPL and Hazel Heald became the springboard for my imagination to take flight with The Medusa Ritual.

Are the two stories anything alike? No. Not really. Both feature a book of forbidden knowledge, both touch on the Cthulhu Mythos, and both have people turning to stone–and that’s it. But the ideas in HPL’s and Heald’s story were enough for Mostyn, Bardon, Dotty, and the gang to say, “Hey! Run with this!” And I did. After all, writers need to listen to their characters. 😃

Serialization

Last week I talked about the practice of serializing novels. So let’s talk a bit about why I’m serializing The Medusa Ritual for free.

First of all, I’m not serializing the finished book, and you might ask why? And the answer is that in a way I’m following Victorian practice.

Frequently in the Victorian era, a novelist wrote the novel as it was being serialized. Dickens, for example, was only one or two installments ahead of his publisher in writing The Old Curiosity Shop. In my case, I handwrite my books, then do an initial edit while typing them. So much like the Victorians, you’ll get the working draft of the book.

Now you might be curious as to why I’m serializing the book for free on my blog. Again, for much the same reason the Victorians serialized: to drum up interest in the book. I’m also hoping to attract more readers to the Pierce Mostyn series, to attract more traffic to this blog, and to get readers to sign up to my mailing list.

In addition, I’m giving you a chance to comment on the work in progress. To be a bit of an editor, as it were.

Serialization is making something of a comeback. Fan fiction is usually serialized. Books are often published in installments on Wattpad. Channillo is a subscription site ($5/month) where writers who want to serialize their work, and get paid, can do so.

There are, in addition, those few writers who issue their novel installments on Amazon and then collect all of the installments into book form.

Steve Bargdill published the novelettes that comprise his Wasteland separately and then collected them in book form.

GC Julien serialized her The Feral Sentence series and then followed up with the installments issued in book form.

For now, I am willing to offer my working draft for free. If my experiment is a success, I might try Bargdill’s and Julien’s approach. In the Victorian era, one of the reasons publishers serialized novels to begin with was to allow those with less disposable income to buy the book. In those days folks could possibly afford the monthly cost of the installment, whereas the outlay for a complete novel may have been prohibitive. It was a win-win for both the publisher and the reader.

Today, when traditional publishing puts a $10 or $15 price tag on the Kindle edition of a James Patterson novel, a 99¢ serial installment looks very affordable.

I know for myself, living on a fixed income, the price tag of a book has become very important. And sad to say, many indies are pricing themselves right out of my wallet. I do not look at indie authors who are selling at the $5 price point or above. And I very much think twice when the book is priced at the $4 price point. After all, I’m stuck with the book if I end up not liking it. I can’t turn it in to the used ebook store to recoup a bit of my money.

For the next 18 weeks, I’ll be running 2 blog posts each week: my regular Tuesday post and on Fridays the installments of The Medusa Ritual. Tune in each week to double your pleasure and double your fun.


Comments are always welcome! And until next time, happy reading!